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Apologies for being sick this past week - nasty bug has come back twice and I just cant completely get rid of it. Yes my Dr. has seen me and given me my drugs, and obviously I'm back in the saddle again. Let's see how the Panthers are doing now...

Thanks AY-BR,
 
Please just remember I'm a feedback nut... What you think/write will impact the story and my writing, so if I'm overdoing it I won't know without you folks telling me if it's good or not!

Welcome to the forums! I will read your Dynasty with the Panthers.

Thanks to Chris for extending the invite to this site... I'm similar to most in that I started in the late 70's with the strat-o-matic baseball and hockey sims. I was an early bandwagoner to OOTP (before they actually started to number the games) but was not on the forums much then. Wargaming is probably my first love and I'm currently playing two PBEM's of War in the Pacific Admiral's Edition. (Very grognard game but you are GM of Allies/Japan so you don't actually do battle in the game, just a computer chair QB...)
 
Anyway Chris asked me to repost my Dynasty -Florida Panthers currently on the FHM forums. I'm happy to and hope you all will read and most importantly COMMENT on the content. This is my first time writing a Dynasty and more than compliments, I want to get better by hearing constructive criticisms. I use a lot of .jpg's to give a visualization of the story and I do take creative license to fill in some.. some... openings? in the FHM game. I will obscure some details of injury times and lengths and even create some mockery and tensions amongst team members just to give some zing to the flavor.  Like it? Hate it? TELL ME PLEASE!
 
I crave feedback...
 

As promised here is the beginning of the tale of the 2013-2014 Florida Panthers... James "Bonehead" Moore was hired as GM/Head Coach replacing ??? and paid $1.5M per year for virtually no hockey coaching skills and really horrible scouting or management skills either. If life were only that easy!
 
This is more in depth for a reason, I usually see people asking about favorite players on thier own teams or league leaders, so I'll give the folks a chance to immerse themselves for just a little more work on my end.  There is a weekly phone call/meeting with the owner updating him on the team status and trades. as Bonehead has commented This owner actually believes he has a team capable of making the playoffs...SMH!
 
The next post will begin the journey and once again feedback is wanted!